I like the idea behind the multiple transformations of person to caterpillar and cocoon to egg. I think you should consider a few different camera angles. I think you should involve your top view more. Maybe use it again to show the caterpillar climbing up the tree. This will help set up the top view of it then falling. Also might be funny if the caterpillar human has a little trouble... maybe runs into a wall or goes down the stairs. Just some other gags to think about with that. But overall I think your story is interesting and has some neat twists.
Grant,
ReplyDeleteI like the idea behind the multiple transformations of person to caterpillar and cocoon to egg. I think you should consider a few different camera angles. I think you should involve your top view more. Maybe use it again to show the caterpillar climbing up the tree. This will help set up the top view of it then falling.
Also might be funny if the caterpillar human has a little trouble... maybe runs into a wall or goes down the stairs. Just some other gags to think about with that.
But overall I think your story is interesting and has some neat twists.